Hello again! Today was the deadline for the first part of the unit or 'beginning, middle and end' brief with sting. I liked the pieces i saw today in the crit. Some i can be honest in saying, a lot more than others. Below is my work, where i show a beginning, middle and end or '3 step guide' to kite flying (a bit of a p*** take).
On the whole with the feedback was very constructive and helpful. The main point that one of my tutors wanted to see more narrative in the piece (with regards to the brief), and to take into account variable (i.e weather). Definitely looking back i can see there is room for improvement on this piece with perhaps the changing the layout among other things. I think i'll probably revisit this piece before my hand in. :)
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